1. 10/29/11, 09:37 pm

Says: "Pat, You have written eloquently about who you see yourself to be, what you are learning and the connections you are making between our seminar and your life. I am so impressed with the time you have taken to carefully consider all of your ePortfolio assignments and to put so much of yourself into them. I have one suggestion that you might consider for the appearance of some of the pages in your ePortfolio. I noticed that in most cases, you kept the “place holder” photos and images that I put into our template as well as the directions for the assignment. I’m thinking that your work will stand out and draw the viewer in more dramatically if you delete the image and direction modules that I placed in the template. If you want to keep the original directions in there, you might consider finding a way to separate what you have done from what I placed in there. Dr McClam "