Thesis Statement:

Fans are the main reason sports have grown and turn into the businesses we know today. 

Thesis Points:

1) Fans have given big business’s a market to make a profit by participating and watching professional athletes.

2)Fans made professional athletes into celebrities and have enforced them to be role models.

3)Without fans, teams have moved or disappeared completely. 

I was thinking about making this a comparison essay between past sports business's and the current sports business. I was planning on focusing on the fans and how they change the game into a a growing business.